Last Friday,I went to climb the Yellow Mountain along with my brother.We arrived at the foot of the mountain around 7 am.The scenery was extraordinary(極佳的—這是高級詞匯，老師會給妳加分~）there.When we started to climb,the weather was perfect.So clear was the sky that we could see hundreds of buildings quite far from the place where we stood.As we were climbing,at first I flet great,full of energy and eager to reach the top.However,as time went by,I gradually flet frustrated.I was nearly to give up when my brother encouraged we to keep climbing,consisting that I was sure to feel regertful if I gave up on the half way.Taking his advise into consideration,Idecided to follow his advise.Eventually,we managed to stand proudly on the top.
上周五，我和我哥去爬黃山。我們早上7點到達山腳。那兒的景色很美。我們開始爬山時天氣很好。天空是那麽的晴朗以至於上百所遠方的建築物都能看得見。我們爬山時，起初我感覺很好，精力充沛且渴望登頂。然而，隨著時間的流逝，我逐漸感覺疲勞了。我快要放棄了這時我哥鼓勵我繼續爬，堅持說如果我中途放棄的話我壹定會後悔的。考慮過他的建議，我決定聽他的。最終，我們成功自豪地站到了山頂。
聲明：全原創，全手打，本人雷鋒轉世，放著自己好好的作文不寫，到這兒來給別人寫。。。。。。
寫了半個小時了，姐姐我手都打酸了~ 采納吧采納吧采納吧~